I think that you could have given a little more detail on your topic.I would also like to have known a little bit more about what those castles looked like !
I thought that you could add some more details. I wanted to know why all these civilians, nights, and lords lived in castles? did they all live in one castle?
I think that you could have given a little more detail on your topic.I would also like to have known a little bit more about what those castles looked like !
ReplyDeleteI thought that you could add some more details. I wanted to know why all these civilians, nights, and lords lived in castles? did they all live in one castle?
ReplyDeleteI think that you could have explained the topics better. I also thinnk you could have added more voice.
ReplyDeleteI think that you should have went a little more into detail. Also you could have told more about the knights and jesters.
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